Response to feedback on the pitch

I received positive feedback from the members of my class as well as my media teacher. The positive feedback was mainly on the thorough detail and presentation of the pitch. However, the critical feedback I got back from my media teacher was that the draft of my digipak did not relate to the synergy which was the tattoo on Gizem's arm. Instead, I used Gizem's eyes as the main focus of the digipak and advertisement which wasn't appropriate.

This was the digipak draft, I am terrible at drawing

so therefore annotated what would be

 present on the album cover.