I have received positive feedback from the members of my class as well as my media teacher. The positive feedback was mainly on good detail and presentation of the pitch. However, she also mentioned that I change my idea on the digi pack because it didn't really relate to the synergy which was the quote tattoo on my arm instead, I used the eyes and eyebrows to be the main focus which wasn't appropriate.
The second suggestion she made was that I include why I have decided to use classy and girly costumes in my video rather than just going with very casual outfits just like the artists I have mentioned in the Dub Step genre. I have now included this briefly in my 'Brand Image' blog post expanding on why myself and group have decided to use girly outfits regarding the Mulvey's theory on the male gaze.
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